My Grandmother's house. It was always my favorite place growing up; that's where all the candy and movies were and where I was first introduced to video games. I always wanted to go to her house to see her and play video games on the Super Nintendo and NES with her, as well as watch movies and play board games, and eat as much candy as I wanted. It was definitely the place to go.
Sunday, August 29, 2010
KCAI ANIM: Hunting & Gathering Project, PART 1
My Grandmother's house. It was always my favorite place growing up; that's where all the candy and movies were and where I was first introduced to video games. I always wanted to go to her house to see her and play video games on the Super Nintendo and NES with her, as well as watch movies and play board games, and eat as much candy as I wanted. It was definitely the place to go.
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Concept:
ReplyDeleteThe content is solid and personal, but the choice in representation feels less thoughtful.
Composition:
Again, based on the text, I don't feel these compositions are strong enough. I think you could have been more creative with your choices.
Detail/execution:
I feel the execution lack commitment and passion (to a degree). Neither drawing feels fully realized and the line weight and detail feel a little hesitant or rushed. I think some bolder compositions, coupled with a more fully fleshed out drawing (including tone, texture, light and more detail) would serve the memory and the observation better. They do not reflect a patient, disciplined approach to the assignment.
Following instruction:
Good